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lloyd11
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Mar 07, 2008 6:40 pm |
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Well I was thinking about writing a whole season of 24 but would like some help with the storyline, so I need your help. If you have any storyline ideas please say, and I'll choose the best one.
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Josephine Marcus
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Mar 07, 2008 11:44 pm |
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An entire season? I have ideas for just scenes and such, but I'd have to think more for an entire story! But I'll try! |
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slade
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Mar 08, 2008 12:48 am |
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Ohh, nice.
I had an idea for a movie once. Maybe you could somehow twist it into a TV show. |
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Sandervs
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Mar 08, 2008 9:07 am |
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Do you have already a start or some pieces of the story |
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lloyd11
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Mar 08, 2008 11:49 am |
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No I don't have any ideas at all, so any storyline is greatly appreciated, I want to make it so it's season 7, so anything after season 6 is fine, for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead.
All I need is help with what would happen at the beginning to get me started and then I can take it from there. |
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lloyd11
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Mar 08, 2008 1:24 pm |
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Ok I was thinking this:
It takes place at 6.00AM, CTU is gone and Jack Bauer is starting his first day at an FBI office in D.C. The FBI gets intel that the President's daughter is going to be kidnapped in a few hours. Jack Bauer is assigned to the case. He finds out that there is a mole within the FBI, telling the terrorist everything he needs to know, and then it goes from there.
How does that sound?? |
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Josephine Marcus
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Mar 08, 2008 6:20 pm |
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Hmm... that could work. but it definitely needs more to it. It needs to be expanded on. |
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lloyd11
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Mar 08, 2008 7:34 pm |
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6.00am - 7.00am
Jack Bauer has arrived at his new job, in the FBI in D.C. An anonymous person calls the office saying that there is a bomb in a school, Jack is assigned the task to find it.
7.00am - 8.00am
Jack Bauer heads the operation to find the bomb, he receives a call from the anonymous caller telling him where the bomb is. Bauer immediately heads to that location.
They are the first 2 episodes, I have written small episode information from 6.00am to 12.00pm and I am continuing to write more. After I have written what each episode will be about I will start to write the script. |
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Manz
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Mar 08, 2008 8:32 pm |
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| lloyd11 wrote: | | for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead. |
oh no i should not have read that
im still on season 1 |
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lloyd11
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Mar 08, 2008 8:36 pm |
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| Manz wrote: | | lloyd11 wrote: | | for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead. |
oh no i should not have read that
im still on season 1 |
hehe sorry for ruining it, I'm half way through season 2 now. |
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DSi
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Mar 08, 2008 10:42 pm |
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Josephine Marcus
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Mar 09, 2008 1:47 pm |
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| Manz wrote: | | lloyd11 wrote: | | for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead. |
oh no i should not have read that
im still on season 1 |
Dont believe that, Teri's not dead
FYI, be sure to use the SPOILER tags for things like that |
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DSi
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Mar 09, 2008 2:36 pm |
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Josephine Marcus
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Mar 09, 2008 2:58 pm |
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| DSi wrote: | | Josephine Marcus wrote: | | FYI, be sure to use the SPOILER tags for things like that |
Actually, a soiler is technically information that hasn't been aired yet, so Teri being dead would not be a spoiler. | Well fine then! Lol. |
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