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PostPosted: Mar 07, 2008 6:40 pm Reply with quote Back to top

Well I was thinking about writing a whole season of 24 but would like some help with the storyline, so I need your help. If you have any storyline ideas please say, and I'll choose the best one.

Thanks in advance.
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PostPosted: Mar 07, 2008 11:44 pm Reply with quote Back to top

An entire season? I have ideas for just scenes and such, but I'd have to think more for an entire story! But I'll try!

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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 12:48 am Reply with quote Back to top

Ohh, nice.

I had an idea for a movie once. Maybe you could somehow twist it into a TV show.
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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 9:07 am Reply with quote Back to top

Do you have already a start or some pieces of the story

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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 11:49 am Reply with quote Back to top

No I don't have any ideas at all, so any storyline is greatly appreciated, I want to make it so it's season 7, so anything after season 6 is fine, for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead.

All I need is help with what would happen at the beginning to get me started and then I can take it from there.
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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 1:24 pm Reply with quote Back to top

Ok I was thinking this:

It takes place at 6.00AM, CTU is gone and Jack Bauer is starting his first day at an FBI office in D.C. The FBI gets intel that the President's daughter is going to be kidnapped in a few hours. Jack Bauer is assigned to the case. He finds out that there is a mole within the FBI, telling the terrorist everything he needs to know, and then it goes from there.

How does that sound??
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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 6:20 pm Reply with quote Back to top

Hmm... that could work. but it definitely needs more to it. It needs to be expanded on.

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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 7:34 pm Reply with quote Back to top

6.00am - 7.00am

Jack Bauer has arrived at his new job, in the FBI in D.C. An anonymous person calls the office saying that there is a bomb in a school, Jack is assigned the task to find it.

7.00am - 8.00am

Jack Bauer heads the operation to find the bomb, he receives a call from the anonymous caller telling him where the bomb is. Bauer immediately heads to that location.

They are the first 2 episodes, I have written small episode information from 6.00am to 12.00pm and I am continuing to write more. After I have written what each episode will be about I will start to write the script.
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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 8:32 pm Reply with quote Back to top

lloyd11 wrote:
for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead.


oh no i should not have read that Sad

im still on season 1

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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 8:36 pm Reply with quote Back to top

Manz wrote:
lloyd11 wrote:
for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead.


oh no i should not have read that Sad

im still on season 1


hehe sorry for ruining it, I'm half way through season 2 now.
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PostPosted: Mar 08, 2008 10:42 pm Reply with quote Back to top

Manz wrote:
lloyd11 wrote:
for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead.


oh no i should not have read that Sad

im still on season 1

Still? You've been on season 1 for a very long time!

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PostPosted: Mar 09, 2008 1:47 pm Reply with quote Back to top

Manz wrote:
lloyd11 wrote:
for example I can't bring back terri bauer because she's already dead.


oh no i should not have read that Sad

im still on season 1


Dont believe that, Teri's not dead Wink

FYI, be sure to use the SPOILER tags for things like that

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PostPosted: Mar 09, 2008 2:36 pm Reply with quote Back to top

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FYI, be sure to use the SPOILER tags for things like that

Actually, a soiler is technically information that hasn't been aired yet, so Teri being dead would not be a spoiler.

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PostPosted: Mar 09, 2008 2:58 pm Reply with quote Back to top

DSi wrote:
Josephine Marcus wrote:
FYI, be sure to use the SPOILER tags for things like that

Actually, a soiler is technically information that hasn't been aired yet, so Teri being dead would not be a spoiler.
Well fine then! Lol.

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