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The Meeting of Jack & RamonTitle:The meeting of Jack and Ramon
By:Kane
Beta by:Michelle_lives_on
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The Meeting of Jack and Ramon
It’s a very hot day in Panhandle Plains, Texas. In the hood of Panhandle Plains we see Tomas one of Ramon Salazar’s men standing outside a rundown house. Inside the house we see Jack Bauer sitting at a table reading a book and minding his own business, with out knowing he is being spied on by one of Ramon’s men.
Tomas peeks inside the house and sees that Jack is reading a book. He takes this opportunity to call Ramon.
Ramon picks up the phone after the fourth ring. He looks at his phone and says, “What is Tomas?”
“Ramon I have found Jack.” Tomas replied.
With a sigh Ramon asked, “Where did you found him?”
After a long silences Tomas spoke, “I found him in Panhandle Plains, Texas. Living in the hood, in an rundown house.”
After this is said Ramon talks into the phone and says, “I will be there in ten minutes. Keep an eye on him for me.”
“Yes Ramon I will keep an eye on him. Do you want me to have him outside before you come?” Thomas asks.
Ramon replies, “No I do not. I will take care of him, when I get there.”
“Okay Ramon. Bye.” Tomas says.
We take anther look inside the house and see Jack making something in oven. Tomas moves a little closer to the widow to see what Jack is up to.
A few minutes later Ramon arrives in Panhandle Plains, Texas. He calls Tomas again.
Tomas picks up his phone on the first ring “Tomas…”
“Tomas it’s Ramon, what street is the house on?” Tomas looks down the road and saw the street sign and said.
“The house is on Main Street.” With that said Ramon hangs up and heads to Main Street.
Meanwhile inside the house Jack is sitting at the table having a cup of hot coco.
When Jack finishes the coco, Ramon arrives at the house.
Ramon gets out of the car and walks up to where Tomas is standing. Than he asks, “Tomas is Jack silt inside?”
“Si sir, he is silt inside.”
“Ok I’m going in.”
“Ramon what do you want me to do?”
“Just stay outside.”
“Okay, boss.”
Ramon walks up to the door and knocks. Jack comes up to the door and unlocks it with a shocked look. Jack asked, “Ramon I thought you died?”
Ramon laughs and says “I can say the same thing about you, Jack”
Jack sighed to himself and says. “Ramon how did you, find me anyway?”
“Jack, I have eye’s every, where.” Ramon replied.
Jack glances at Ramon and asks. “Damn it what are you doing here?”
Ramon laughs again, “I’m here for revenge. Come out of the house.”
“Damn it Ramon, why should I come out?”
“Because, Jack, if you don’t come out I will come in and take you out myself.”
If looks could kill, Jack’s look right now would, “Fine I will come out.” Jack walks out of the house and faces Ramon.
With a smirk on his face Ramon looks at Jack and says. “That a good boy. Now come a follow me to my car?”
“Why would I follow you to your car?”
“Jack if you do not follow me, to my car I will kill you right here!”
Jack puts his hands in the air and says. “Okay Ramon you win this round.”
Ramon and Jack walk back to Ramon’s car and get into it. They start to head back to Mexico. Ramon pulls up to the house and parks the car. He gets out of the car and goes to the side Jack is sitting in He opens the door and says, “Get out of the car Jack!”
Jack gets out of the car and Ramon says. “Jack, follow me.”
With a shacking voice Jack asks. “Where are we going?”
Ramon turns to him and says. “Don’t ask questions Jack!”
They go into the house and walk to Ramon’s office. When they get into the office Ramon turns to Jack. “Sit down Jack?”
“Damn it Ramon where do want me to sit?” Jack replies.
“I want you to sit in a chair.” They look at another.
When Jack sits down Ramon asks. “Do you remember the last time we where in here? And what we did?”
“Yes Ramon. What does that have to do with anything?”
“It has to do with what we will do later.”
“What?” Jack asked.
“There is one thing I want. And the only reason you are still alive.” Ramon says.
“What is that, Ramon?”
“You will find out soon. Come with me to my bedroom?”
With a shacking voice Jack asks. “Why should I go with you to your room?” “Because Jack I will kill you if you don’t.”
After that is said Jack gets up and follows Ramon to his room. “That a good boy.” Ramon said, “Jack I want you to take off you clothes, and if you don’t take them off I will cut them off.”
“Damn it Ramon I will not take my cloths off for you!”
“You leave me no choice Jack. Turn around and face the wall” Ramon says.
“What for Ramon?”
“I’m going to cut your cloths off Jack.” Jack goes up to the wall near the door and faces it. He has his back to Ramon.
Ramon pulls out a knife and says to Jack “I did not what to do this to you, Jack”. He starts cutting the clothes off of him.
“Ramon, stop it, I will take off my clothes for you” said Jack.
“It is too late for that now Jack” replied Ramon.
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KoolJack1
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hey Kane, nice to c u here as well:) a great re-read, all your fics are so great:)
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DSi
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Heh that's really funny 
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kane
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Thanks guys for the feedback.
I mint put more of my fics up on this site.
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