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Jack Bauer (KIEFER SUTHERLAND) is back but working with Bill Buchanan (JAMES MORRISON) who runs a secret underground CTU only months after they had been shut down by a corrupt government angency known as the JBA.
While trying to search for the agency Jack and the others along with Chloe O'Brian (MARY LYNN RASJKUB), Morris O'Brian (CARLO ROTA), Mike Doyle (RICK SCHRODER) and Nadia Yassir (MARISOL NICHOLS) as they race against the clock to track down wanted Russian terrorist Amosha (TOBIAS MEHLER) who has been attacking the US for seven to eight weeks.
While President Wayne Palmer (D.B WOODSIDE) along with Chief of Staff Tom Lennox (PETER MACNICOL) an Karen Hayes (JAYNE ATKINSON) are in a political stand off with Russian President Yuri Suvarov (NICK JAMESON) who learns that a military group working in the United States plans to attack Russia. Having heard nothing of this the President orders Karen and Tom to investgate this.
Starring
Jack Bauer - Kiefer Sutherland
Mike Doyle - Rick Schoder
Bill Buchanan - James Morrison
Chloe O'Brian - Mary Lynn Rasjkub
Nadia Yassir - Marisol Nichols
Amosha - Tobias Mehler
Morris O'Brian - Carlo Rota
President Wayne Palmer - D.B Woodside
Tom Lennox - Peter MacNicol
Karen Hayes - Jayne Atkinson
McAllister – Jill Wagner
President Yuri Suvarov - Nick Jameson
Commander William Fletcher - Niel Jackson
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates – Stephanie Jacobsen
General Jonas Freeman – Gary Chalk
Vice President Noah Daniels – Powers Boothe
Oh and an FYI on my spin off series it kinda went down the crapper plot/idea wise so enjoy my S7!
Episodes 1 - 4 will be posted on the same night followed by (hopefully) a new episode each week |
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24 - SNAKE EYES TRAILER
Announcer
...this year 24 is back
Jack Bauer
He wasn't alone. He had at lest twenty men with him...maybe even more
Announcer
CTU is gone...
Chloe O'Brian
Fine...any leads on the agency that shut us down?
Bill Buchanan
I'm still looking...but whoever it was they seem to be off the grid either a private US agency or....
Chloe O'Brian
A terrorist cell posing as a government agency
Announcer
And the terrorist is far more dangerous
Unknown Man
I see you managed to evade capture. Good you will be needed for the rest of the day
Amosha
The day? You mean....
Unknown Man
Yes...today is the day when we put our plans into action. Today will be a day unlike any other that the United States have seen before
Announcer
...even American
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General Jonas Freeman
Everything loaded onto the trucks yet?
Soldier #1
Just about sir. I just need to get one more item from the weapons locker and then we're done
General Jonas Freeman
Good job son...we need to get out of here as quickly as possible. If anyone finds out that we where here we're finished.
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Fort Randford was just attacked
Vice President Noah Daniels
What? When?!
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
About 25 minutes ago sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
I was hoping for another answer. But I guess it'll have to do was anything stolen?
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
I'm having Homeland Security look into that now. I'll let you know when I hear back from them
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Announcer
Jack will meet his match
Amosha
I have an ID card yes
Unknown
Welcome abord sir
Announcer
An under cover operation
Male Voice
Who is it?
Nadia Yassir
Night is dark. And the day will be just as dark as the night
William Forbes
How did you find out about us?
Announcer
Explosive action from start...
Jack can be seen running down the darkened streets of Los Angeles
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Announcer
...to finish
Jack Bauer
We need to stop these guys before the can do any damge
Announcer
A conspricy will unfold
Tom Lennox
Hello?
Unknown
Is this Tom Lennox?
Tom Lennox
Yes who is this?
Unknown
My name is of no importance. But we do need to meet
Tom Lennox
Actually it is
Unknown
Alright but not over the phone I cn't run the risk of the call being traced
Tom Lennox
Fine where?
Unknown
The Washington motel not far from the White House and tell no one. You have one hour
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Announcer
And a twist that will blow...your...mind
Daniel
Excellent work Nadia....welcome to the JBA
Nadia can be seen pointing a smoking gun right out in fron of her
Announcer
All this and more in the new season of...
24 A SPECIAL ONE NIGHT FOUR EVENT. COMING THIS APRIL....DONT MISS A SECOND |
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Cool but how will the spoiler blow peoples mind's if they have seen it in the trailer? |
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| whycantkimdie? wrote: | | Cool but how will the spoiler blow peoples mind's if they have seen it in the trailer? |
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24 – TWENTY FOUR
SNAKE EYES
THE FOLLOWING TAKES PLACE BETWEEN 12:00 A.M. AND 1:00 A.M.
EVENTS OCCUR IN REAL TIME
-White House, Washington D.C-
-12:00 a.m. EST-
The Oval Office is where President Wayne Palmer and his chief of staff Tom Lennox and Karen Hayes stood around talking about the recant wave of terrorist attacks which had been going on for six weeks
President Wayne Palmer
And we can confirm that this man Amosha is behind these recant attacks?
Karen Hayes
Remember sir that this did come from the Russian intelligence. Which as you know we can always speculate on
Tom Lennox
I agree with Karen sir. We cannot trust this new Intel until we can properly prove that it is concrete
President Wayne Palmer
Tom this is our only connection....from what President Suvarov told me this man has also been wanted for committing mass genocide. Now they tell me that their people want to see this man dead but as I understand it he may also be connected to the disappearance of one of our military units.
Tom Lennox
Exactly why we need to hold off on any major take down. Just in case the Intel is wrong and we end up back at square one
Karen Hayes
Without any leads
President Wayne Palmer
Still no word from the strike force from the last lead?
Karen Hayes
None sir
Tom Lennox
And I don't suspect that we ever will. We have to put that strike down as a failed attempt at capturing this man
President Wayne Palmer
Maybe. But we had better come up with a solid lead fast. With CTU gone we may have lost our only good fighting chance. We need to be careful
Karen and Tom nod their heads in agreement
-Abandoned Facility, Los Angeles-
-12:03 a.m-
Jack Bauer followed by Mike Doyle enter the remains of a facility in Los Angeles hidden underground more than half a SWAT team lay dead on the ground
Mike Doyle
How the hell does one man take out an entire SWAT team?
Jack Bauer
He wasn't alone. He had at lest twenty men with him...maybe even more
Jack looks through the remains of one of the dead men holding a machine gun but finds nothing
Mike Doyle
Think we need to call this one in Jack.
Jack brings out his cell phone and dials the number for Bill Buchanan after a few seconds of ringing the man's voice can be heard
Bill Buchanan
Jack...what do you have?
Jack Bauer
Bill this was a bust. There's nothing here
At the bottom of the phone a scrambler device can bee seen. Doyle was looking at this still trying to get used to this fact
Bill Buchanan
That's not good Jack...it means he's still out there Amosha needs to be stopped at all coasts which means we need to follow every single lead we get.
Jack Bauer
Want me and Doyle to come back?
Bill Buchanan
There's nothing more we can do. Unless Chloe finds a solid lead which is harder now than it used to be all you can do is sit tight
Jack Bauer
Roger that
Jack hangs up and notices Mike looking at the scrambler
Jack Bauer
What?
Mike Doyle
Nothing. Thing's are weird now
Jack followed by Doyle exit the facility
-Underground CTU, Los Angeles-
-12:06 a.m.-
Bill walks over to Chloe O'Brian who was working at one of the small stations. This kind of technology was not to her liking a lot less advanced than that of CTU Los Angeles which had been shut down a little under 12 months ago
Bill Buchanan
Anything?
Chloe O'Brian
The new security system's a bitch. I would honestly work faster if I had the desktop back at the real CTU
Bill Buchanan
Well you're just going to have to get used to it...with everything that's going on we need to stick with what we've got. It may not be as advanced as your used to but I know you'll figure something out
Chloe O'Brian
Fine...any leads on the agency that shut us down?
Bill Buchanan
I'm still looking...but whoever it was they seem to be off the grid either a private US agency or....
Chloe O'Brian
A terrorist cell posing as a government agency
Bill Buchanan
Exactly...which is why we need to be careful. If they find out that we are still secretly running all hell's going to break lose.
Chloe O'Brian
I'll let you know if I find something
Bill Buchanan
I know you will
Bill walks over to his small semi – office where Nadia Yassir worked
Nadia Yassir
Anything found at the facility?
Bill Buchanan
It was a slam dunk.
Nadia Yassir
I think I may have a solid lead on the agency that shut us down
Bill Buchanan
Who is it?
Nadia Yassir
Well they don't have a name but they're known to many terrorist cells in the United States the code name is the JBA
Bill Buchanan
I was rather hoping for the opposite...but this is better than nothing we got a location?
Nadia Yassir
I'm still trying to narrow that down. But it's not looking good
Bill Buchanan
None of this makes any sense. Keep working on it
Nadia nods as Bill exits the room leaving her to do her work
-Unknown Location, Los Angeles-
-12:12 a.m.-
Amosha with his twenty or so men enter a large office like building escorted by his men he goes up to the twenty second floor where his boss sat. We do not see his face only hear his voice
Unknown Man
I see you managed to evade capture. Good you will be needed for the rest of the day
Amosha
The day? You mean....
Unknown Man
Yes...today is the day when we put our plans into action. Today will be a day unlike any other that the United States have seen before
Amosha
What's the plan?
The man slides out a piece of paper placing it right in front of Amosha
Unknown Man
Go to this address...once there wait for my call and the codes you'll need
Amosha without asking any questions takes the piece of paper and exits the room, the man meanwhile picks up his phone and dials a number
Women
Yeah?
Unknown Man
McAllister it's me
McAllister
You need me for something?
Unknown Man
I need you to get the codes for us...and I need them by 3:00 a.m.
McAllister
Four hours? There is no way I can possibly do that with this kind of time frame
Unknown Man
I'll double your pay
McAllister
You promised me three thousand dollars
Unknown Man
I will pay you twenty two million dollars. Will that get me the codes?
McAllister thinks for a minute before answering
McAllister
You'll have the codes by 3:00 then
Unknown Man
Call me the second you have them
McAllister hangs up as the man looks through the office window into the late night sky
...12:15:22...12:15:23...12:15:24...
...12:19:49...12:19:50...12:19:51...
・ Jack and Doyle are entering the underground CTU
・ Karen and Tom are looking over some papers with the President
・ Amosha is in an armed van driving down the late night streets
- McAllister just exiting her apartment
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-Underground CTU, Los Angeles-
-12:19 a.m.-
Jack walks over to Chloe and Morris O'Brian who worked together at the same station
Jack Bauer
Chloe Morris
Morris O'Brian
Chloe was able to track this call
Mike Doyle
Who made it?
Chloe O'Brian
a women named McAllister no first name on record
Chloe plays the call
| Code: | Women
Yeah?
Unknown Man
McAllister it's me
McAllister
You need me for something?
Unknown Man
I need you to get the codes for us...and I need them by 3:00 a.m.
McAllister
Four hours? There is no way I can possibly do that with this kind of time frame
Unknown Man
I'll double your pay
McAllister
You promised me three thousand dollars
Unknown Man
I will pay you twenty two million dollars. Will that get me the codes?
McAllister thinks for a minute before answering
McAllister
You'll have the codes by 3:00 then
Unknown Man
Call me the second you have them |
The call recording ends their Jack an Doyle look at each other
Jack Bauer
The only thing we've got going for us. Chloe while we're out on the feld I want you and Morris to find out any information you can on this McAllister.
Bill walks over to Jack
Bill Buchanan
Jack what do you have?
Jack Bauer
Chloe found a possible lead
Bill Buchanan
What?
Jack Bauer
A women named McAllister just got an anonymus phone call about a set of codes
Bill Buchanan
Government codes?
Jack Bauer
Unknown. Me and Doyle are gona head back out and track her
Morris O'Brian
Jack she's located at an apartment in West LA
Jack Bauer
We'll call you when we're on site
Jack and Doyle exit the underground CTU
-Fort Ranford, Washington D.C.-
-12:24 a.m.-
General Jonas Freeman walks over to one of his officers who was helping some soldiers load something onto one of the military trucks
General Jonas Freeman
Everything loaded onto the trucks yet?
Soldier #1
Just about sir. I just need to get one more item from the weapons locker and then we're done
General Jonas Freeman
Good job son...we need to get out of here as quickly as possible. If anyone finds out that we where here we're finished.
Soldier #1
Don't worry General. I'll be quick
General Jonas Freeman
Good
The soldier walks away from the General walking past some dead bodies of the US Army who where stationed here. It was very clear that these soldiers and the General have gone rouge. After a few minutes of waiting the General sees the soldier carrying a large metal box
Soldier #1
Like I said sir quick
General Jonas Freeman
Good job load it onto the truck and move out. We need to stay off the streets
The soldier nods as the General moves into the truck as the soldier along with the large metal box loads it on and gets in himself as the trucks in front of this one begin to move out of Fort Ranford
-Air Force Two, Above the Atlantic Ocean, International Airspace-
-12:27 a.m.-
Vice President Noah Daniels sits in the office of Air Force Two looking out the small window and out into the shining moon light which glowed on the shimmering waters.
Women
Sir?
Vice President Noah Daniels
Yes?
Women
The Secretary of Defence is waiting for you
Vice President Noah Daniels
Send her in please
The women steps out of the door way to allow Lisa Bates the new Secretary of Defence to enter
Vice President Noah Daniels
Lisa sorry I kept you waiting
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Sir you're the Vice President you wait as along as you want to begin a meeting
Vice President Noah Daniels
In any case. Got any updates for me?
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Yes and not a good one sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
Great just what we need...more bad news
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Fort Randford was just attacked
Vice President Noah Daniels
What? When?!
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
About 25 minutes ago sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
Do we know who was responsible for the attack?
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
None sir...but I have a theory
Vice President Noah Daniels
And?
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
General Freeman sir. The missing military group which was directly in his command
Noah sighs
Vice President Noah Daniels
I was hoping for another answer. But I guess it'll have to do was anything stolen?
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
I'm having Homeland Security look into that now. I'll let you know when I hear back from them
Vice President Noah Daniels
This is exactly what I feared
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Sir forgive me but I don't understand
Vice President Noah Daniels
Fort Ranford was originally set up to store top secret weapons and viruses which if fallen into say the hands of your basic or domestic terrorist groups could prove to be one of the worst attacks in our nations history.
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
I'll get back in touch with Homeland
Lisa stands up and leaves the room and picks up the phone on the desk
Vice President Noah Daniels
Get me the President
.....12:32:01....12:32:02.....12:32:03.....
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- Jack is kicking down the door to McAllister's apartment
- General Freeman's convoy are driving through the streets of LA
- Chloe and Morris are working at their station
- Tom Lennox is working in his private office
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-White House, Washington D.C.-
-12:36 a.m.-
Tom sits in his office looking over some papers and working on his computer when is phone begins to ring he answers it
Tom Lennox
Hello?
Unknown
Is this Tom Lennox?
Tom Lennox
Yes who is this?
Unknown
My name is of no importance. But we do need to meet
Tom Lennox
Actually it is
Unknown
Alright but not over the phone I cn't run the risk of the call being traced
Tom Lennox
Fine where?
Unknown
The Washington motel not far from the White House and tell no one. You have one hour
The call ends leaving Lennox a little confused as a knock comes from the door
Tom Lennox
Come in
Karen steps in
Karen Hayes
Tom you okay?
Tom Lennox
Did you patch in a phone call to me just now?
Karen Hayes
No why?
Tom Lennox
Someone just told me that they wish to meet with me at the Washington motel near here
Karen Hayes
Why?
Tom Lennox
They wouldn't say over the phone. I didn't even get a name
Karen Hayes
Well in any case...the President just got off the phone with Daniels and Fort Ranford has been attacked
Tom Lennox
What? When?!
Karen Hayes
Just before 12:24
Tom Lennox
Isn't that place supposed to be top secret?
Karen nods her head
Karen Hayes
Yes but obviously not as secret as we thought
Tom thinks for a moment
Karen Hayes
You can't seriously think that the phone call you got and the attack are connected?
Tom Lennox
The timing is too close to deny it...I may have to follow this lead
Karen Hayes
What do you want me to do?
Tom Lennox
Don't let the President know of this. If I am right and the events are somehow connected....then the President could be in serious danger.
Karen stands up and leaves the room allowing Tom to grab hos jacket and leave too shutting the door behind him.
-Apartment Building, West Los Angeles-
-12:40 a.m.-
Jack and Doyle are rumming through some files in McAllister's apartment when Jack hears some foot steps. He silently calls for Doyle to raise his weapon and go to the left side of the door while Jack puts his back up against the wall to the left with his gun at the ready as she enters the apartment once she is out of Jack's site and her back is turned to him he silently moves towards her and points his gun at her head
Jack Bauer
That's close enough
McAllister
Look if you are with him. I have the codes I just need to upload them
Jack Bauer
We know you're being paid to sell secure government codes to a known terrorist
McAllister
Wait...who are you?
Mike Doyle
He's the man who's going to kill you if you don't tell us what we need to know
McAllister
Damn-it
Jack Bauer
You're coming with us
Jack still holding his gun to her head leads McAllister out of the apartment leaving Doyle to shut the door behind him and follow them
-Underground CTU, Los Angeles-
-12:41 a.m.-
Nadia walks over to Bill who was working at a computer station
Nadia Yassir
Bill I've found where the JBA is held up
Bill Buchanan
Where?
Nadia Yassir
I was able to trace some money transfers to a bank acount here in Los Angeles but the actual group are located in Washington D.C. And I think I can get close to them
Bill Buchanan
Going in as a double agent is very risky Nadia
Nadia Yassir
Bill we don't have much of a chose...we're pretty much in the dark as it is having someone opperating on the inside is again pretty much the only card we can play right now
Bill Buchanan
First things first. How do you plan on contacting a member of the group?
Nadia Yassir
I managed to trace the bank number to a small boat house in South LA. I can go meet with the guy now
Bill thinks for a moment, on one hand Nadia was right they are as of this moment without any leads and one person he could end up being a miss lead. He looks up at Nadia who was waiting on Bill's word to go ahead with the mision
Bill Buchanan
You have a go...and for go sake Nadia don't get caught by any government agency
Nadia Yassir
I won't
Nadia walks away from Bill to get herself ready
-West Los Angeles, Los Angeles-
-12:43 a.m.-
Jack and Doyle along with their new lead drive through the near empty streets of West LA as Jack brings out his phone
Bill Buchanan
Jack did you find anything in McAllister's apartment?
Jack Bauer
No but we did find McAllister we're bringing her back to the HQ now
Bill Buchanan
Jack there's something you should know. Nadia was able to trace a money transfer from someone inside the JBA to a boat house in south LA. She's going to try and go in undercover with the group
Jack Bauer
Is she up for it Bill?
Bill Buchanan
She says she is. And I believe her
Jack Bauer
Alright thanks Bill we should be there in about....
As Jack is about to finish the car is toplled over and gun fire can be hear from the other end of the street from one of the building roof tops
Bill Buchanan
Jack! Answer me! Jack!
Bill doesn't get a reply as the phone Jack was contacting him with has been shot Jack, Doyle and McAllister are trapped behind the car
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- Jack Doyle and McAllister as still stuck behind the toplled over car and shooting blindly
- Tom Lennox is just about to reach the Washington Motel
- Bill is working with Chloe and Morris
- Nadia is approching a boat house in south LA
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-Boat House, South Los Angeles-
-12:54 a.m.-
Nadia walks onto the docked boat house and knocks on the door
Male Voice
Who is it?
Nadia Yassir
Night is dark. And the day will be just as dark as the night
The is a pause as Nadia says ''Night is dark, and the day will be just as dark as the night'' which she had learnd was a very secret password offten used by the JBA the door opens and out steps a man named William Forbes
William Forbes
Not out in the open
Nadia steps into the boat house as William shuts the door behind her
William Forbes
How did you find out about us?
Nadia Yassir
The guys who shut down CTU? Please I actually have to thank you for that...I wouldn't have been able to inact my plans if those sneeky bastards down at CTU where on my ass
William Forbes
That all you wanted to say? Just an oh thanks for shutting down the pain in my ass CTU making my job easier? I highly doubt that
Nadia sits down and is offered a glass of what looked like wiskey
Nadia Yassir
No you're right. I didn't come here just to thank you guys
William Forbes
Then why?
Nadia Yassir
You guys have a pretty well orginised team. I want in
William Forbes
We can't just let any one person in...for all I know you could be a spy for the government
Nadia Yassir
If I was a government agent...don't you think I would have a gun hidden somewhere? You can check yourself if you like
William stands up and runs a search for weapons. After a few minutes of finding nothing he sits back down
Nadia Yassir
See? No guns
William Forbes
So let me get this all in a nut shell. You once worked with either the CIA, FBI, NSA or CTU but they pissed you off so badly you're trying to get back at the government for a terrible tragic attack on your family or even your people? Please stop me if I'm wrong
Nadia Yassir
No like you said. In a nut shell I was in charge of finding a former Russian army General named Molokov who had committed acts of manslaughter on my people. The government did nothing they just let him kill thousands of innocent women and children
William Forbes
I'm gona need to run a back trace on this story
Nadia Yassir
By all means
Nadia sits down as William walks over to his computer to confrim Nadia's story
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- Nadia watches as William runs his background trace
- Chloe and Morris work on faking the story
- Jack Doyle and McAllister are still pinned down as the gun fire continues
- General Freeman arrives at his location and his men are taking the stolen item
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-Boat House, Los Angeles-
-12:58 a.m.-
William is getting his weapon which was near the small lap-top looking over the story in which he was surpised to find in the government records
William Forbes
Well....your story checks out
Nadia Yassir
As I knew it would
Forbes moves closer and brings out his arm to shake her hand
William Forbes
Welcome to the JBA
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THE FOLLOWING TAKES PLACE BETWEEN 1:00 A.M. AND 2:00 A.M.
EVENTS OCCUR IN REAL TIME
-North Hollywood, Los Angeles-
-1:00 a.m. EST-
Jack Bauer, Mike Doyle and McAllister are still pinned down by gun fire from a building across the streets
Mike Doyle
Jack we're not going to get anywhere with this!
Jack Bauer
You see that empty apartment over there?!
Mike looks at where Jack was pointing
Mike Doyle
Yeah...why what are you thinking?
Jack Bauer
If you give me just enough cover fire. I can get onto the roof top of that building and get a clear shot and take this guy out
Mike Doyle
You expecting reinforcements?
Jack Bauer
That's how these guys work
Jack gets his pistol ready
Jack Bauer
On the count of three
Doyle gets himself ready as McAllister stays ducked behind one of the tiers
Jack Bauer
One...two...three!
Doyle aims his gun to the location of their shooter as Jack quickly runs through the streets and over to a near by abandoned apartment building
-Abandoned Apartment Building, Los Angeles-
-1:07 a.m.-
Jack enters the Abandoned Apartment building and as fast as he can runs up the stairs towards the roof. Jack kicking the door open rushes to a spot where he could get a clear shot of the shooter. Jack aims his weapon at the target and fires killing the shooter and sending him falling face first to the ground below.
Jack quickly heads back down the stairs and meets up with Doyle and McAllister who where entering the apartment building.
Jack Bauer
Nice timing
He looks over at McAllister
Jack Bauer
We need to ask you a few question. If these guys are attacking then they must be looking for you
McAllister
Great just what I need...so the guy I sold the codes to is either pissed off about them being so late and no he wants me......
McAllister pauses knowing she had let something slide
McAllister
Damn-it
Mike Doyle
We're not going to get to CTU in time Jack
Jack Bauer
We need to do the interrogation now. What are the codes you sold?
McAllister
There government codes...that's all I know the man who I got them from didn't tell me what they where for
Jack Bauer
Who sold you the codes?
She doesn't answer the question
Jack Bauer
WHO SOLD YOU THE CODES?!
Jack grabs her by the neck and bashes her against the wall near Doyle who jumps back
McAllister
JAMES HELLER!
Jack stumbles back a little in shock Doyle looks on in shock at the name
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...1:16:03...1:16:04...1:16:05....
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- Jack, McAllister and Doyle walk down the streets of LA
- James Heller sits in his beach house looking out the window
- Nadia is still on the boat house with Forbes
- Tom Lennox walks into the Washington Motel
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-Washington Motel Room 12, Washington D.C.-
-1:16 a.m.-
Tom Lennox enters Room 12 of the Washington Motel not far from the White House
Tom Lennox
Hello?
No answer
Tom Lennox
Look I was told to meet someone here...so we might as well get this over with
Tom hears the sound of a gun clicking and stops moving
Unknown
Don't move
Tom does as he is asked by the man holding the gun. The man was speaking in a German ascent and moves closer to Tom
Unknown
All I want you to do is listen...we don't have much time. I was sent in by the people who I work for to give you and you alone some valuable information about an enemy we both have in conman. The source has been approved so you don't need to run a background search.
He reaches into his left pocket with his other hand and places a piece of paper into Tom's jacket pocket
Unknown
This should give you all you need. If you need to get in touch with me...don't or my operation will be blown nod if you understand
Tom nods letting him know without talking that he understands
Unknown
Good. And sorry for this too
The man knocks Lennox out with the butt of his gun making him fall to the end of the bed giving the man time to leave without being seen.
-Abandoned Apartment Building, Los Angeles-
-1:19 a.m.-
Jack hands McAllister her phone back placing the scrambler at the bottom
Jack Bauer
One wrong word and you'll regret it
McAllister nods and starts to dial the number for ''James Heller'' with Jack pointing his pistol at her head
James Heller
Yes?
McAllister
Mr. Heller...look we need to meet again
James Heller
Why? I gave you what you wanted
McAllister
I need more than you gave me. My employer isn't happy
Heller can be heard sighing
James Heller
Come to my beach house...we'll talk more when you arrive
McAllister
Is she there?
Jack knew she was talking about James Heller's daughter Audrey Raines
James Heller
If by ''her'' you mean my daughter...then yes she is here but she's sleeping
McAllister
Good I should be there at 1:38
James Heller
I'll be here
McAllister hangs up and looks over at Jack
McAllister
Audrey is there Jack. But asleep
Jack Bauer
Good...we can't let her know that her father is working for a terrorist
McAllister
Hey lets get on thing straight pal. I am not a terrorist
Mike Doyle
Yeah but you're a collaborator which is just as bad
McAllister
Look we don't have time for this. You can prosecute me later if that's what you really want. But right now we have a deadline to meet and we have no means of transport
Jack Bauer
When I was up on the roof I noticed a parked car. This guy probably has the keys
McAllister
Well then lets move
Jack McAllister and Mike exit the building
-Boat House, South Los Angeles-
-1:25 a.m.-
Nadia still sits in the boat house as Forbes brings out his cell phone and makes a call but he speaks in another languages which luck had it Nadia could understand
William Forbes
Daniel, het is me (Daniel, it's me)
Daniel
Wat is het Forbes? (What is it Forbes?)
William Forbes
Wij hebben een andere speler in het spel, Nadia Yassir (We have another player in the game, a Nadia Yassir)
Daniel
Is zij schoon? (Is she clean?)
William Forbes
Ik controleerde haar achtergrond zelf, heeft zij schoon (I checked her background myself, she's clean)
Daniel
Breng haar aan de hoofdkwarten (Bring her to the head quarters)
William hangs up and looks at Nadia
William Forbes
What?
Nadia Yassir
Didn't know you spoke Dutch
William Forbes
It's a tactic the JBA use...we use a different dialect each day great way to throw the feds off
Nadia Yassir
Could have used that tactic a while ago
William Forbes
We should be leaving now
Nadia stands up as Forbes steps in front of her the two leave the boat house
-Counter Terrorist Unit, Main Headquarters, Washington D.C.-
-1:29 a.m.-
Female CTU Agent
Miss Driscoll!
Erin Driscoll the head of D.C. CTU walks over to the agent who called on her
Erin Driscoll
Jessica you have something?
Jessica Richards
I managed to pick up a conversation coming from south Los Angeles talking about someone named Nadia Yassir
Erin Driscoll
Former Los Angeles CTU agent? Why?
She plays the phone call which with the new technology at this CTU was automaticly translated
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William Forbes
Daniel, it's me
Daniel
What is it Forbes?
William Forbes
We have another player in the game, a Nadia Yassir
Daniel
Is she clean?
William Forbes
I checked her background myself, she's clean
Daniel
Bring her to the head quarters
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The call ends
Erin Driscoll
Now why would Nadia Yassir's name be brought up in a conversation by a man who's been on the NSA watch list for three years
Jessica Richards
Maybe she's trying to establish a cover?
Erin Driscoll
Maybe...but run a trace on the call anyway
Jessica Richards
Want me to call this one in?
Erin Driscoll
Until we have proof that Nadia has either gone rouge or is under cover. No one and I mean no one but you and I can know about this
Jessica Richards
I'll get to work on tracing that call
Erin Driscoll
Good
Erin walks off to leave Jessica to her work and walks over to agent Tom Baker
Tom Baker
Yeah?
Erin Driscoll
Jessica's running a trace on a phone call between someone on the NSA watch list
Tom Baker
About?
Erin Driscoll
Nadia Yassir former Los Angeles CTU agent
Tom Baker
Why her?
Erin Driscoll
We have two speculations...Jessica believes that she could be trying to go under cover with this man
Tom Baker
And the second one?
Erin Driscoll
I believe she's gone rouge
Tom Baker
You want me out there?
Erin Driscoll
Take Dale along with you
Tom Baker
Understood
Tom walks over to agent Dale Waker
Dale Waker
We on?
Tom Baker
Get your gear
Dale walks away from his position to grab his equipment
...1:33:40...1:33:41...1:33:42...
...1:38:58...1:38:59...1:39:00...
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- Tom is entering the White House with his hand over his head
- Nadia is driving through the streets of LA with William
- Bill Chloe and Morris still work together
- Jack McAllister and Doyle arrive at Heller's home
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-James Heller's Beach House, Los Angeles-
-1:39 a.m.-
Jack brings the stolen car to a stop a few feet away from Heller's home just far enough away for them to plan ho they are going to plan this.
Jack Bauer
Here's how this is gona work: Mike I want you to stay here near the car and watch for anyone coming. McAllister you'll lead me inside and remember if you tip him off you'll regret knowing me. We clear?
Mike and McAllister nod Jack opens the doors to the car allowing Mike and McAllister to step out. Jack hides behind McAllister's back as best he could pointing the gun at her head as she walks up to the front door and rings the door bell after a few minutes Heller opens it
James Heller
You alone?
She doesn't answer because Jack came out from behind her gun still pointed out at her and Heller who was shocked at his sudden apperence. ''This is it'' Heller thought to himself. For the last time he saw Jack was no more than six to seven months ago...Jack stared with anger into the man's eyes and says to McAllister
Jack Bauer
Get in...both of you
Heller followed by McAllister then Jack enter his home. Jack shuts the door behind him
Jack Bauer
Sit down
McAllister sits down. But Heller still stands
James Heller
Jack you don't want to do this
Jack Bauer
Sit down! And shut up!
Heller sits down at Jack's raised voice
Jack Bauer
The only reason I'm here. Is to extract information out of you...I'm not trying to get Audrey back the truth is you where right about one thing and one thing only. She doesn't deserve to have me in her life...she doesn't need to go through all of the terrible things that happen to me and everyone around me. My daughter who left because she didn't want anything to do with me which was in her right to do. And my wife Teri who died at the hands of someone who I completely trusted! Then you come along...the only reason I didn't fire my weapon was because of Audrey but if you don't tell me everything I want to know you'll die right here and right now
James Heller
Jack listen...you meant more to me than you think. But you took too many chances and then when you where captured by the Chinese Audrey was the only one who never gave up. Everyone else but her gave up on you even me. Then she went to China and just look at what happened to her you may have gotten through to her but that could have been a one time only thing. You made her like this...you are the main reason she is like this
Jack gets angry at these words
Jack Bauer
I DIDN'T MAKE HER LIKE THIS! The Chinese did! Not me...not me
James Heller
The point is Jack if you hadn't gone through with the raid on the Chinese embassy none of this would have happened...you and Audrey could still be together
Jack Bauer
How dare you....after everything I have done for you! How dare you put this all on me!
Jack walks closer to Heller so the gun is pointed directly into his left eye
James Heller
Jack please...I am begging you don't do something that you'll regret
Jack Bauer
Just give us what we need...and we'll leave
Doyle comes bursting through the door
Mike Doyle
Jack we've got a problem!
Heller covers his eyes as a flash bang is thrown into the living room blinding Doyle, Jack and McAllister as a unit of CIA agents come rushing in Jack is put in hand cuffs along with the others and is taken out of the area
-Underground CTU, Los Angeles-
-1:43 a.m.-
Bill Buchanan
Any word on Jack yet?
Morris O'Brian
None but we did pick up some increased chatter from the CIA
Bill Buchanan
Anything good?
Chloe O'Brian
Something about James Heller's beach house
Bill looks at a letter he had in his hands it read as follows :
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In order to stay hidden from the governments raider, I and those who work for me have taken in and followed my exact orders. But the question on everyone's mind is ''What do we do now?''.
It's not an easy task sir but we've got everything planned and worked out...well I have anyway. And to answer your question no Jack doesn't know about you and yes it will stay that way. Until we figure out exactly what's going on here no one but myself will know that you are working for us.
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Bill was going to ask one of the two people in front of him to deliver the message, but the question is ''Could they be trusted not to look at the letter?'' but he simply put the letter back in his jacket pocket and looks over at the two
Bill Buchanan
If something has happened to Jack and Doyle, then it may be either the FBI or CIA which if one of the breaks. It could mean the end of everything we've done so far....but having it mean nothing isn't an option I want to consider
Chloe O'Brian
What do you want us to do?
Bill Buchanan
Find anything connecting any recant phone calls between agencies, I want everything and anything you can find...if Jack has been caught along with Doyle and our lead we need to find some way of helping them escape without exposing us at the same time....Chloe your in charge until I get back
Chloe notices a letter in his hands, knowing what and who it was for Chloe does not question the order as Bill walks out
....1:48:57....1:48:58....1:48:59....
....1:52:06....1:52:07....1:52:08....
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- Jack Doyle and McAllister sit in a holding cell at the CIA H.Q
- Nadia and Forbes still drive through the streets of Los Angeles
- Bill sits on a park bench under a tree so as not to expose his contact
- Erin sits in her office at CTU D.C looking over some phone records
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-CIA Headquarters, Los Angeles-
-1:52 a.m.-
Jack paces back and forth through the holding cell of the CIA Headquarters in Los Angeles, looking for means of escape
Mike Doyle
Jack you've been looking for a way out ever since we got here, take a break
Jack Bauer
Not until we find a way out of here
He looks over at McAllister and walks over to her
Jack Bauer
I need to know what the codes James Heller sold to you are for...and I need to know now!
McAllister
They are codes....that when imputed allow someone to change say security names into a database of say something like an airport
Mike Doyle
You mean allowing a terrorist to become a security guard?
McAllister
Exactly
Jack Bauer
And possibly allowing them to gain control of a flight, meaning the death millions of people! And you just gave it up for money
McAllister
Believe me if I knew what I was getting into, I would never have agreed
Jack Bauer
We need to get out of here
-Park, Los Angeles-
-1:54 a.m.-
Bill stands near one of the trees when he notices a darkened figure walking towards him
Unknown Man
You alone Bill?
Bill Buchanan
Are you sure you should be calling me by my name?
The two men stand under a tree, the man next to Bill still cannot be seen
Unknown Man
You're right....does Jack know of my involvement?
Bill Buchanan
No don't worry, I won't go back on our deal
Unknown Man
Good because if Jack finds out I'm in on this...then everything goes to hell
Bill Buchanan
Are you saying Jack can't be trusted?
Unknown Man
When it comes to me...no he can't Jack and I have a history a bad one
Bill Buchanan
Don't remind me, I was part of that history too
Unknown Man
Speaking of Jack any chance of him escaping?
Bill Buchanan
Chloe called before you arrived, she said that she could cut the power to the Headquarters just enough time for Jack and the other two to escape
Unknown Man
How long?
Bill Buchanan
Not long now
Unknown Man
I have some men stationed as CIA agents, they'll be ready
Bill at that stands up and walks away as the man brings out his cell phone
Henchman #4
Yes?
Unknown Man
O'Brian's going to be shutting down the power, be ready to help Bauer and the others
Henchman #4
Understood
-CIA Headquarters, Los Angeles-
-1:55 a.m.-
Jack stands near the door thinking of how they can escape, when the lights switch off...Jack can hear two CIA agents argue outside
CIA Agent
Sir no one is allowed near the prisoners
Jack can then hear the agents being knocked out and the door being opened.
Man
We need to get you out of here sir
Jack Bauer
Who the hell are you?
Man
They'll be plenty of time for questions later...right now we need to get you the hell out of here
Jack Bauer
Fine but after that I wanna know what the hell's going on!
Jack quickly exits the room with McAllister Doyle and the man who rescued them, they quickly dash through the hallways of the Headquarters and head down the stairs...the power comes back on
Jack Bauer
Son of a bitc*...we need to hurry
As McAllister heads down with them, she is shot and killed
Jack Bauer
NO!
Jack quickly heads towards her body
McAllister
LAX....
She said with her dying breath, Jack knowing there wasn't much time hurries through the Headquarters catching up with Doyle
Jack Bauer
LAX!
Doyle not asking any questions, moves with Jack as the man who rescued them covers their backs as they escape
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- Jack and Doyle are running down the stairs of the Headquarters
- Amosha and his men arrive at LAX Airport parking lot
- President Palmer is shifting through some files
- Nadia and Forbes enter a hidden underground transit hub
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-Underground Transit Hub, Los Angeles-
-1:59 a.m.-
Nadia Yassir
What is this place?
William Forbes
A secret Transit hub used by the JBA
Nadia Yassir
Where's the Headquarters?
William Forbes
Washington D.C
Nadia is stunned by this as Forbes walks onto the small enough for two, platform which was on some rails on the ground
William Forbes
You still in Nadia?
Nadia Yassir
Yeah I'm still in
Nadia with William's help gets onto the platform, as Forbes uses the controls to activate the Transit system and head for the Headquarters
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THE FOLLOWING TAKES PLACE BETWEEN 2:00 A.M. AND 3:00 A.M.
-Underground Transit Hub, Los Angeles-
-2:00 a.m.-
Nadia and Forbes stand on the platform of the underground transit hub as it moves through the underground tunnels, nadia was surprised that these even existed and was shock at how fast it was moving
William Forbes
Something on your mind Nadia?
Nadia Yassir
How many of these things do you have set up?
William Forbes
We have Transit Hubs set up all over the country, one here in Los Angeles...another in Navada, New York. Washington obviously and well anywhere we can find that isn't known to the government
Nadia Yassir
How long will it take us to arrive at the Headquarters?
William Forbes
At this speed, we should reach the Headquarters by 2:12...I can make it go faster
Forbes along with Nadia laugh at the joke, Nadia is still very much impressed by this secret now known to her but one question was still on her mind
Nadia Yassir
Who's the man in charge of the JBA?
William Forbes
Moss
Nadia Yassir
No first name?
Forbes looks over at Nadia
William Forbes
He'll tell you himself, that is if you can be trusted
He turns back to the controls of the platform
-Counter Terrorist Unit, Main Headquarters, Washington D.C-
-2:05 a.m.-
Erin Driscoll and Jessica Richards sit in the confernce room going over their Nadia Yassir situation with Vice President Daniels on the line
Erin Driscoll
Here's the situation report sir: A few hours ago, we managed to trace a phone call between a man we have been abale to identify as William Forbes. A member of the underground terrorist cell known olny as the JBA
Vice President Noah Daniels
That's not much of an update Erin
Erin Driscoll
I know sir, but we've found that Nadia Yassir is either under-cover with or working with the JBA
Vice President Noah Daniels
Yassir? Why?
Jessica Richards
Sir we believe that this is all somehow connected to the shut down of CTU Los Angeles, but even if that is the case...then we've got a big problem
Vice President Noah Daniels
You mean we've got an underground CTU on our hands?
Erin Driscoll
Maybe sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
Maybe? You mean to tell me, that we think we have a rouge CTU operation going on right under our noises but your not 100% sure?
Erin Driscoll
Exactly put sir. We don't know how long they've been running
Vice President Noah Daniels
You just addmitted to not being 100% sure, but now you say been running as if you actually know they exist? Which one is it Erin? Maybe? Or 100% sure?
Erin Driscoll
I can't answer that yet sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
Exactly, look I don't mean to be a pain in the ass but I need to know when you have proof that CTU is running an underground operation. That means Nadia is innocent, if not...then we have to work under the evidnce that she's gone rouge
Erin Driscoll
We'll call back when we have more
Vice President Noah Daniels
See that you do Erin
The phone call ends Erin sighs and looks over at Jessica
Jessica Richards
Is he allways like that?
Erin Driscoll
(sighs) Actually you caught him on a good day
Jessica Richards
Love to see him on a bad day, if this is what he's like on a good day
Erin laughs a little at the joke
Erin Driscoll
Get back to work, let me know if you find more info
Jessica Richards
I will
Jessica stands up and leaves Erin alone to collect her thoughts
-JBA Headquarters, Washington D.C.-
-2:12 a.m.-
The platform comes to a stop at the JBA Headquarters in Washington D.C right at the time which Forbes had predicted
William Forbes
See? Right on time
Nadia following Forbes steps off the platform and enters the Headquarters, to her surprise it was a little more edvanced than that of their old and their underground CTU as she walked through the hallways with Forbes she looked around at all the computers which seemed newer then what she was used to
Nadia Yassir
Impressive
William Forbes
Thank you, we've been working none stop to get these systems hack free as possible. But we've done a pretty good job so far in such a limited time frame
Daniel Moss can be seen walking towards them
Daniel Moss
You must be Nadia Yassir
Nadia does not answer
Daniel Moss
Silence huh? Well...that's good
He walks away with Forbes to talk with him, Nadia tries to hear what they where talking about. But only hears the word ''Prisoner'' coming from Moss who looks back at her
Daniel Moss
Follow me
Moss begins to move Nadia follows, they walk past a couple of JBA agents who stare at her as she walks by. They come to a stop as Moss places his eyes directly on the scanner device which light green alloing them to enter the room...
In the small room was a security camera hovering over the door, to Nadia's shock and horror Tom Baker sat tide to a chair mouth colsed by duck tap.
Daniel Moss
We caught this man, trying to enter our base of operatoin...given what he knows we can't let him leave
Nadia Yassir
Forbes mentioned something about a test?
Moss says nothing but grabs a gun from the table, and hands it to Nadia
Daniel Moss
This is the test
Nadia knowing she didn't have time to think, takes the gun and points it at Baker's head
Daniel Moss
You know this man...yes?
Nadia Yassir
Nearly killed me, once or twice...I'm just re-paying the favour
Daniel Moss
Then re-pay it
Nadia looks at Baker who shook his head fearcly, but Nadia shows no fear and kills him with a shot to the head which killed him instantly...the smoke came from the point of the gun as Nadia lowers it Moss walks in front of her with his arm out to shake her hand. Nadia and Moss begin to shake hands
Daniel Moss
Welcome to the JBA
...2:16:00...2:16:01...2:16:02...
...2:20:45...2:20:46...2:20:47...
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- Jack and Doyle where dashing through the streets of LA
- Vice President Daniels was looking over some papers from CTU D.C.
- Tom Lennox was in his office going over what has happened to him
- Amosha is still with his men putting Security Guard outfits on
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-Air Force Two, Over the Atlantic Ocean-
-2:21 a.m.-
Noah sits in his office as his phone begins to ring, he answers it
Vice President Noah Daniels
Yes?
Female Voice
Sir I have Tom Lennox on the line for you, he says it's important
Vice President Noah Daniels
Put him through
After a few seconds Tom can be heard
Vice President Noah Daniels
Tom it's been a long time
Tom Lennox
Sir the reason I'm calling you, is because you are the only one I can fully speak to about this
Noah hears the worrying tone in the Chief of Staff
Vice President Noah Daniels
Wha's wrong Tom?
Tom Lennox
Someone called me asking to meet with me, when I arrived at the meeting point the contact said he had information on Amosha...but there's something about the way he spoke
Vice President Noah Daniels
How'd he speak?
Tom Lennox
German and I think I have a pretty good idea, of who he is
Noah holds to wait for Tom's speculation
Tom Lennox
Theo Stoller
Vice President Noah Daniels
What the hell is Stoller doing in the United States?
Tom Lennox
I have no idea sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
You think he knows something about General Freeman?
Tom Lennox
If he knows about Amosha, and I've gotta stress the if then yes sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
Damn-it. Has the President been informed?
Tom Lennox
No sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
Good keep it that way...for now at lest
Tom Lennox
You'r call sir
Vice President Noah Daniels
I'll be at the Pentagon in an hour or so. We'll talk more then
Tom Lennox
Understood sir
As Tom hangs up Karen walks into his office
Tom Lennox
That was Vice President Daniels. He said he wants me to meet him at the Pentagon when he arrives so I'll be leaving shortly
Karen Hayes
Does the President know? If not what do you want me to tell him?
Tom Lennox
Exactly what I told you a second ago
Tom not answering any more questions from Karen he walks past her and exits the room, Karen sighs and wonders if there's more going on than meets the eye.
-Counter Terrorist Unit, Main Headquarters, Washington D.C-
-2:24 a.m.-
Michelle walks into Driscoll's office with a look of worry on her face. She stands near the door
Erin Driscoll
What?
Michelle Richards
Tom Baker's transmiter went dead just a short while ago
Erin Driscoll
Damn-it....any word on Yassir?
Michelle Richards
None last I heard Baker was following up a lead. Which you sent him on
Erin Driscoll
To find Yassir
Michelle Richards
There's a chance that Nadia was the one that killed Baker
Michelle begins to get teary-eyed. She and Baker had known each other for many years and had only recantly became more than ''just friends'' Erin tries to put on a comforting smile on and begins to speak
Erin Driscoll
Michelle I know you and Baker where close. And I can't begin to imagne the pain you must be felling...but you have to try and put that aside until we capture Yassir and find out if she knows anything that could lead us to General Freeman
Michelle nods at the order and walks out of the room when her phon begins to ring, the caller ID read as ''VICE PRESIDENT DANIELS'' she answers it.
Erin Driscoll
Mister Vice President. What can I do for you?
Vice President Noah Daniels
Any luck on Nadia Yassir yet?
Erin Driscoll
One of our agents Tom Baker died a few minutes ago. We believe that Nadia is responsible for his death and we are investgating the matter
Vice President Noah Daniels
Tom Lennox was contacted by a man who he claims is Theo Stoller
Erin Driscoll
What does Stoller have to do with any of this?
Vice President Noah Daniels
That's what I want you to figure out. Look for any connections between either Freeman and Stoller or Stoller and Amosha
Erin Driscoll
Understood sir
The phone call ends leaving Erin wondering what Theo Stoller's involvment is, that is if he is involved at all
...2:33:51...2:33:52...2:33:53...
...2:38:58...2:38:59...2:39:00...
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- Amosha and his men are hidden in a plane which was touched down at LAX
- Jack and Doyle enter the main terminal of LAX looking for Amosha
- Nadia is helping Forbes by putting Baker's dead body in the furnic
- Bill is sitting in his office waiting to hear from Jack
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-Underground CTU, Los Angeles-
-2:39 a.m.-
Bill sits in his office waiting for a call from Jack. He was beginning to get a little worried and wonder if he was ever going to call in.
Just then the phone begins to ring he answers it even though the caller ID read as ''UNKNOWN''
Jack Bauer
Bill it's Jack
Bill Buchanan
Jack where the hell have you been?
Jack Bauer
I don't have time to explain. Me and Doyle are at LAX
Bill Buchanan
LAX? For what possible reason?
Jack Bauer
McAllister's dead. But before she died she gave us a location for Amosha's next target
Bill Buchanan
What flight?
Jack Bauer
Bill I think it's American Airlines flight 225
Bill Buchanan
Are you sure?
Jack Bauer
Without concrete proof no I can't be sure. But it's the only lead we have
Bill Buchanan
Alright keep us informed, we'll try and give you a flight path
Jack Bauer
Copy that
Bill hangs up and walks out of the semi - office
-LAX, Outside of LAX, Los Angeles-
-2:40 a.m.-
Jack Bauer
I'm gonna have to sneek on the plane myself
Mike Doyle
I'm coing with you
Jack Bauer
No you're not. We can't tip Amosha off if he plans to use the plane as a potenial weapon
Mike Doyle
Fine what do you want me to do?
Jack Bauer
Head back to CTU. Trust me they need you more than I do
As Jack walks away from Doyle heading towards American Airlines flight 225. Doyle heads in the other direction away from Jack
-Air Force Two, Five miles from Washington D.C-
-2:42 a.m.-
Unknown Voice
Does he suspect anything?
Unknown Female Voice
No. My cover is well protected
Unknown Voice
We have evidance that directly implacates Amosha's next target. You need to convince the Vice President that Bauer is unstable
The women speaking through her scrambled cell phone is Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
The Vice President has never trusted Bauer...so it shouldn't be too hard to convince him that he is unstable. But the only problem is do we expose the underground CTU?
Unknown Voice
No. At lest not yet anyway
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
I'll call you when it's done
Unknow Voice
Don't be too long...my partners are beginning to dislike us. Be careful
Lisa hangs up the cell phone and exits the small tight spaced bathroom, she walks into Vice President Daniel's office
Vice President Noah Daniels
Lisa is the room set up for my meeting with Tom Lennox?
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Yes sir. Also we touch down at 2:57
Vice President Noah Daniels
Thanks
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Lets just hope that he isn't wasting your time
Vice President Noah Daniels
I know just inform me when we're on final approch. Ok?
Secretary of Defence Lisa Bates
Yes sir
Lisa walks out of the room sighing as she shuts the office door behind her
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- Air Force Two is still in the night sky making its way to Washington D.C
- Jack is now on American Airlines flight 225 in hiding
- Bill works with Chloe and Morris trying to get a flight path for Jack
- Nadia is being shown around the JBA Headquarters
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-American Airlines Flight 225, Los Angeles-
-2:51 a.m.-
Jack hides in the darkness of the Cargo Holds on American Airlines flight 225 as he waits for a flight path from Bill and the others at the underground CTU. Never in a milion years Jack thought that he'd find himself sneeking onto an Airplane but this would be the second time he had done so. His phone rings he answers it
Bill Buchanan
Jack we've got a flight path
Jack Bauer
Where's it heading?
Bill does not answer
Jack Bauer
Where is this flight heading?!
Bill Buchanan
Washington D.C
Jack is shocked at the destantion that Bill had given him
Jack Bauer
Bill if they plan to use this plane as a weapon in Washington. Then the targets are either the White House or even the Pentagon
Bill Buchanan
Jack you need o stop them at all costs. We cannot let Amosha take control of the plane
Jack hangs up
Jack Bauer
Son of a bitch
Jack looks around the cargo hold for any thing he could use to stop the plane from taking off. But he was too late the plane's wheels came up and set in place of where they normal would go before take off. A gun shot can be heard from the upper deks where all the passengers sat screaming.
Jack moves trying not to bee seen to investagte. Amosha and his men have made their presance known Jack knows he must find a way to stop the plane from reaching its target
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- American Airlines flight 225 was just taking off from LAX Airport
- Jack is walking through the cargo holds on flight 225
- Tom was driving down the streets of Washington heading for the Pentagon
- Air Force Two was touching down at a military base in Washington
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-Streets of Washington, Washington D.C-
-2:57 a.m.-
Tom is driving through the streets of Washington D.C when his cell phone rings, he answers it
Unknown Male
Lennox do not go through with the meeting
Tom Lennox
I already told the Vice President I was on my way. No turning back now
Unknown Male
Please you have got to listen to me!
Tom Lennox
Not until you tell me who the hell you are!
The man on the other line can be seen and he is Theo Stoller
Theo Stoller
Very well...my name is Theo Stoller Mister Lennox. And if you go through with meeting the Vice President you will be killed
Tom looks on in shock at what he had just heard. Was Theo telling the truth? Or was he just making up an excues to get him to meet with him...
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Special Agent Mike
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Joined: 27 May 2008
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Wow nice job!! that's quite awesome! |
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